Pohmme-d-adham's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Journeys of Reemus: Ch 3]

Wonderful..

Just played it 10 times or so.. Brilliant game.

[SC Guitar Maniac Dx 2]

Great!

I think the most playful game in the series. A must!

[Bloons Tower Defense 3]

Awesome!

Great game, very balanced in difficulty and nonstop fun!

[World of Pain RPG: C3]

Err.. Well. Could have been better.

Well, it is a nice rpg-maker produced game. I liked the menu, the desingn by itself, the combat system and the programming facts. Yeah.. But as "beginner" in working with Rpg-maker I have to tell you, that either mapping is your strongest ability nor be serious in "rpg-like" language and storylining. I was really irritated, when the music randomly changed. There was no reason! Also when you teleport from one map to another, the music began from the beginning and I think it's one of the easiest exercises to fix such little details, cause the software already gives you the possibilities to calibrate such things with one single click. The NPC's often speak similar and I thought "well, there's only one Npc who has a fable for cosplaying or so..."
Also the giant maps were not real qualitative. its better to hold on the real norms in size of rooms etc. Just look at the chests in relation to the room, it's quite unrealistic. Better have more teleport-events then creating giant map monsters. Besides it's gainful to put your world in more maps, cause you can play with the rpg-maker-sources more without getting the player bored of the same things in each room.
The Beginning was the typical "I have no idea how to start" process. Someone waked up in a bed without knowing where he is. My thought was, that your concept missed a clear storyline. The first thing before working with rpg-maker is writing a strict storybook, with climax and so one. It sounds old, but: PLEASE think on us players who want to see stories, which are planned from the beginning through the end. Authentity is almost the most important thing in this genre. The graphic could be as worse as you can imagine, when the story behind just knocks you out.

Nevertheless:
Don't get me wrong, I just want to give you some critique to work on the project, cause I think it's not quite bad as it seemes after my harsh words :) I love such rpg-games and work on one by myself. I think it will cost years to realize my concept...
I just registered cause of your game. Just wanted to help with my review. At least you brought newgrounds a new member ;)
I give you a 5/10. I think, there is more potential, just continue on hard working with rpg-maker and also search for other sources, make it more authenical, use less standard-music and graphics, that are the first steps to get a really great self-made game.

Greetings,
Pohmme-d-adham